There was a challenge on a writing forum to produce a 50-word story that had to end with the phrase ‘With that – she shot him!’
I don’t advocate the use of handguns nor exclamation marks but here is my effort.
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‘The .44 Magnum, one of the most powerful handguns, delivers a large, heavy bullet at high velocity at the expense of recoil, so much so that it is considered unsuitable for shooters of smaller, feminine, weaker build.’ He said, handing her the big gun.
With that – she shot him!
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Love it – short and to the point!
Thank you, Sally.
Punchy, like it. Good flash fiction.
Thank you, Betty. Your blog made me laugh.
Thanks Mike – just an old lady’s daily drivel but it amuses me and keeps me in touch with family and far flung friends
I think you are coming up with some good stuff